2009年4月19日星期日

Final Essay Plan

Introduction:Now, there are so many people want to explore in the world. This is because they just think about the benefits that they can get, they don't think about the trouble they will meet. Exploration can make countries develop more faster and be strong. That's true. On the other side, it is also bad cause anything all have two sides.
Thesis Statement:So, exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding by the impediment in communication, different customs and the explorers' wild ambitions.

Body Paragragh 1
Topic Sentence:Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding because people have impediment in communication.
Body:The explorers and the native people lived in different places, so they had different languages. They would have impediments in communication because they don't know what they said. This may could make people feel upset and wouldn't want to talk with each other any more. Sometimes, the words in The explorer's country was good, but it was the opposite meaning in the native people's place. They would get misunderstanding in languages and make conflict between them, even arguing with each other.
Concluding Sentence:Thus, exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding by the impediment in communication.

Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence:Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding because they have different customs.
Body:Sometimes they have different ideas so that cause confilcts.
Customs can not be changed at once because they are accumulated by many years . They have different customs to do something.When they do something in their own customs ,other people may think the things they did are wrong and impolite so that the conflicts misunderstanding would happen.They may would argue eachother.
Concluding Sentence:Hence,different customs will create conflict and misunderstanding.

Body Paragragh 3
Topic Sentence:Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding because of the explorers' wild ambitions.
Body:When the explorers arrived in a land, they all wanted to take good things there to their country.They all had wild ambitions to country the lands.The native people wanted to protect their home so that they would fight with people who wanted to occpey their home.That was a reason caused the conflicts and misunderstanding.
Concluding Sentence:As a result, the explorers had wild ambitions would lead them to make confilcts with the native people.

Conclusion:In a word, exploration can create confilct and misunderstanding bacause the impediments in languages , different customs and the explorers'wild ambitions.It’s very important to explore because it can find new lands and matters. Exploration is good for people to develop their countries fast and became advanced, but it can also create conflict and misunderstanding. So, people need to explore carefully and have a friendly relationship between two countries.

1 条评论:

  1. This just looks like your essay. Is it really a plan?

    10/10

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